2008-12-09

First Grade Writing

Just thought I'd share a few excerpts from our writing time today....

"If I could give one gift to the world, I would give every person a pet dinosaur bird. It has blue feathers, a blue tail, and a brown neck. It comes with a tree to stand on and a home and a tank. You have to give it meat because it is a carnivore. It will eat any kind of meat you give it. It really loves meat...but do not put your finger inside the tank!"


"If I could give one thing to the world it would be water because some places don't have water. They have to get in a line. 100 people are in the line."


"If I could give one gift to the world it would be recycling! I would not cut down trees to make a house, so I wouldn't have to pay 300,000 dollars. It can be fun recycling!"


"If I could give one gift to the world it would be dogs because they are so cute and fuzzy and they lay on you. I love them because they are dogs."


"If I could give one gift to the world it would be 400 guinea pigs. I think the people would be happy and they would not even have to thank me. Then I would love this place."


Hahaha...some of the kids wrote really thoughtful things...but some were just hysterical. First graders are great.

4 comments:

Heather Olds said...

hey..i didn't know you were quoting me when i was telling you about my guinea pig wish..
but it's true..400 guinea pigs and then, and only then, would i love this place..
jk..

Sarah King said...

hahaha...yeah, I totally here you...that's what this place is missing!

Matt Olds said...

This is the best thing i have read in three weeks. so increble. so funny...

Sarah King said...

I just realize I wrote "here" instead of "hear"....first grade writing runs through my veins apparently.